What Aliyah and Blessing said.
I suppose it's cause you don't have free time like you said so we won't hold it against you though. Keep at it and you'll get better.
Don't get me wrong, I like a good parody or non-sensical comedy, but I love those brave fools willing to make a (for lack of a better term) "serious" flash. Something that could appear on TV as an action toon rather than just slapstick comedy. I truly hope you'll continue with this. Consider me a fan.
I'm not really into comics in a swf. If the images are going to be static I'd rather just see them laid out on a webpage. This wasn't too bad though. It was good for what it is. The dialogue was a little cheesy here and there, but the art was pretty nice. My only real question is what's up with the boobie chick? She wears straps that seem to have no purpose but to cover her (clothing) but she only covers one boob. Why is that? I could see if she was going all natural and then I'd reason that's just her way or the way of her people or something.
I could see if she dressed in all straps, she'd be wearing clothing like normal but just expressing a unique fashion sense. But I can't for the life of me figure out why someone would fall in the middle and choose to cover part of it but randomly walk around with an exposed breast. Please explain the character to me.
Well there is no way to see it right now but all of her people dress with those straps, men and women alike. Similar to how you see some greek or roman clothings have an exposed breast. I originally made them completely nude but thought it looked kinda silly. They're also highly religious although you don't see that yet, easy answer is "They just dress that way." But it is a racial thing, not a personal thing.
I only have one problem....
Why were you so late with this?!? I knew it would be great, the anticipation was murder. You told us it would be up at midnight wednesday, and I was on when 11:59 tuesday turned to midnight wednesday, but there was no game!!! At least you weren't TOO late with it. I love this thing! Glad you found time to make this, I hope it will inspire others here on ng.
If nothing else, at least you confused me... I think...
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